小作文——折线图
The graph below gives information on the numbers of participants for different activities at one social centre in Melbourne, Australia for the period 2000 to 2020.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
范文：
开头段：改写题目，凑字数
The graph illistrates the numbers of participants in film club, martial arts, amateur dramatics, table tennis, and musical performances at a social centre in Melbourne during the period from 2000 to 2020.
第二段：讨论稳定的两个（key word:相似，轻微波动，最高，相对稳定，下降后上升）
As seen, the numbers of film club and martial arts participants in the beginning and end of the period remained similar, despite experiencing some fluctuations. Specially, in 2000, the film club had by far the highest number of participants at 64, and its participation was relatively stable, reaching around 65 participants by 2020. Meanwhile, martial arts started with aboyt 36 participants in 2000, but that figure showed a decline, dropping to around 30 in 2005 before increasing again to 36 in 2020.
由此可见，尽管经历了一些波动，但该时期开始和结束的电影俱乐部和武术参与者人数保持相似。特别是，2000年，电影社的参与人数是迄今为止最多的，为64人，参与人数相对稳定，到2020年达到65人左右。与此同时，武术比赛在 2000 年开始时只有 36 名参与者，但这一数字有所下降，在 2005 年下降到 30 人左右，然后在 2020 年再次增加到 36 人。
【好词好句】
1.despite experiencing some fluctuations 除了遇到了一些波动
2.remained similar 保持相似
3.had by far the highest 是历史最高的
4.is relatively stable 相对稳定
5.reaching +数字 达到了...
6.started with,...开始的时候
7.but that figure showed a decline, dropping to +数字+ in+ 时间+ before increasing again to +数字+ in+ 时间.
【连接词】
1.As seen,... 由此可见
2.Specially,... 尤其是
3.Meanwhile,... 于此同时
第三段：增长和下降的线（key word:先最少后增长，先缓慢增长后激增，先缓慢增长后持续下降）
On the other hand, musical performances and table tennis saw growths in their participation rates. Notably, musical performances had the fewest participants until 2010, with none before 2005 and only 12 in 2010. However, joiners in that activity increased gradually to around 20 in 2020. Likewise, involvement in tennis climbed slightly from around 18 participants initially to around 20 in 2010, after which it surged to 55, surpassing martial arts' participation rate, making tennis the second most popular activity in the centre. In contrast, although the number of amateur dramatics participants rose slightly from 26 in 2000 to about 28 in 2005, it dropped constantly to approximately 8 in 2020.
另一方面，音乐表演和乒乓球的参与率有所增长。值得注意的是，直到 2010 年，音乐表演的参与者最少，2005 年之前没有，2010 年只有 12 人。然而，2020年，参加该活动的加入者逐渐增加到20人左右。同样，网球的参与人数从最初的约 18 人略有攀升到 2010 年的约 20 人，之后激增至 55 人，超过了武术的参与率，使网球成为该中心第二受欢迎的活动。相比之下，尽管业余戏剧参与者的人数从 2000 年的 26 人略有上升到 2005 年的约 28 人，但到 2020 年却持续下降到约 8 人。
【好词好句】
1.saw growths in 有所增长
2.had the fewest participants until +时间 在xx之前都是最少的人
3.with none before 时间 and only 数字 in 时间 在..之前没人，在..只有...人（描述这条曲线）
4.increased gradually to 数字 in 时间 逐渐增加到了..人
5. climbed slightly from ... initially to ... , after which it surged to ...从最初的...逐渐上升到...，之后又激增到了...
6.surpassing ... 超过了...
7.making 名词 the second most popular activity 让..成为了第二受欢迎的运动
8.although ... rose slightly from ... to ...,it dropped constantly to ... 虽然...慢慢上升从...到...，但它持续下降至...
【连接词】
1.On the other hand,... 另一方面
2.Notably,... 值得注意的是
3.However,... 然而
3.Likewise,... 同样
4.In contrast,... 相比之下
Overall段：
Overall, the film club maintained the highest and most stable participation rate throughout the period, while table tennis saw the most significant upturn in participants.
总体而言，电影社团在整个期间保持了最高和最稳定的参与率，而乒乓球的参与人数增长最为明显。
【好词好句】
1.maintained the highest and most stable 保持最高和最稳定
2.saw the most significant upturn 增长最为明显（upturn 好转）
大作文：双边讨论
Some people think that competition at work, at school and in daily life is a good thing. Others believe that we should try to cooperate more, rather than competing against each other.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
范文：
开头段：改写题目
The debate over whether we should prioritize competition or cooperation has gained momentum. While both opinions offer distinct advantages, I believe that they are equally significant for both individual and organizational development.
关于我们应该优先竞争还是优先合作的争论愈演愈烈。虽然这两种观点都有各自的优势，但我认为它们对个人和组织的发展都同样重要。
【好词好句】
1.The debate over whether we should prioritize 名词A or 名词B has gained momentum.
关于我们应该优先发展A还是B的讨论愈演愈烈
2.While both opinions offer distinct advantages, I believe that they are equally significant for both individual and organizational development.
虽然这两种观点都有各自的优势，但我认为它们对个人和组织的发展都同样重要。
Body1：
On the one hand, cooperation is vital for academic and career success. This is because cooperation can create a harmonious environment where people can freely share their ideas and information, which could improve their engagement in teamwork and also enhance individual understanding of work and study. For instance, a cooperative working environment can improve the job satisfaction of employees, letting them identify themselves as part of the team and contribute their effort and resources to work. As a result, cooperation not only benefits individuals but also leads to high-quality working outcomes. Additionally, many global challenges, such as global warming, also need all countries to make joint efforts to ensure the well-being of mankind.
一方面，合作对于学业和事业的成功至关重要。这是因为合作可以创造一个和谐的环境，人们可以自由地分享他们的想法和信息，这可以提高他们在团队合作中的参与度，也可以增强个人对工作和学习的理解。例如，一个合作的工作环境可以提高员工的工作满意度，让他们认识到自己是团队的一部分，并为工作贡献自己的努力和资源。因此，合作不仅使个人受益，而且带来了高质量的工作成果。此外，许多全球性挑战，如全球变暖，也需要各国共同努力，以确保人类的福祉。
【好词好句】
1. is vital for 是重要的
2.harmonious environment 和谐的环境
3. improve one's engagement 提高...的参与度
4. enhance individual understanding 提高个人的理解
5.improve the job satisfaction 提高工作满意度
6.identify themselves as part of the team 把他们视为团队的一份子
7.contribute their effort and resources to work 贡献努力和资源
8.leads to high-quality working outcomes 带来了高质量的工作成果
9.need all countries to... 需要所有国家...
10make joint efforts 共同努力
11.well-being of mankind 确保人类的福祉
【连接词】
1.On the one hand,... 一方面
2.This is because ... 解释说明
3.For instance,... 举例
4.As a result,... 因此
5.Additionally,... 此外
Body2：
On the other hand, competition always serves as a driving force for individuals and organizations to strive for excellence. Healthy competition contributes to self-improvement and innovation to some extent. For instance, many enterprises, especially some cutting-edge technology companies renew and develop their products frequently as they need to maintain competence among other companies and to attract consumers. However, solely relying on cooperation or competition could lead to many negative results. To be specific, cooperation might cause complacency and competition might cause too much stress, burnout and rivalry.
另一方面，竞争总是个人和组织追求卓越的动力。良性竞争在一定程度上有助于自我完善和创新。例如，许多企业，特别是一些尖端科技公司，由于需要保持与其他公司的竞争力，并吸引消费者，他们经常更新和开发产品。然而，仅仅依靠合作或竞争可能会导致许多负面结果。具体来说，合作可能会导致自满，竞争可能会导致太多的压力，倦怠和竞争。
1.serves as a driving force for 作为...的动力
2.strive for excellence 追求卓越
3.contribute to 有助于
4.to some extent 一定程度上
5.enterprise 企业
6.cutting-edge technology 尖端科技
7.maintain competence 保持竞争力
8.solely relying on 仅仅依赖...
9.To be specific,... 具体来说
10.complacency 自满
11.burnout and rivalry 倦怠和竞争
总结：
In a nutshell, I think that cooperation and competition should not be mutually exclusive as the combination of them could exert the most positive influence to both individuals and organizations.
简而言之，我认为合作与竞争不应该是相互排斥的，因为它们的结合可以对个人和组织产生最积极的影响。
【好词好句】
1.In a nutshell,... 简而言之
2.mutually exclusive 相互排斥的
3.exert the most positive influence 产生最积极的影响